[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-samples-05

Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 16 November 2021 14:55 UTC

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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-samples-05
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2021-11-16
IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-26
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A well written document ready for publication

Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:
The following terms were used without prior definition in the text: PEM, OCSP,
CRL - they are well known in the security community, but not in the RFC Editor
list of well known terms not needing expansion on first use.

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