[Gen-art] GenART review of draft-schaad-pkix-rfc2875-bis-03

[Martin Thomson <[e-mail]>]

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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: raft-schaad-pkix-rfc2875-bis-03
Reviewer: Martin Thomson
Review Date: 2012-12-06
IETF LC End Date: Aaaages
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: Looks good to me.  Ship it.

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 3 does not establish a notation convention for multiplication.
 I didn't find a specific place that this was a problem, but it seemed
appropriate since multiplications was, in some places denoted 'n*b'
and others as 'xy', even though multi-character identifiers are used
in many places.  This does imply that a precedence override is
necessary.  I suggest parentheses, since they are already used
extensively.

Section 3: s/MAC funtion/MAC functions/

Section 5: could use a more rigorous list construction, the
definitions all run together

Needs more ASN.1

--Martin