[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-abel-nfc-urn-00.txt
Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Thu, 31 August 2006 10:30 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-abel-nfc-urn-00.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd before posting a new version of the draft. Summary: This draft follows the guidelines of RFC3406 correctly and is ready for publication. There are a couple of trivial nits that should be fixed before publication. Nits: s1: The second paragraph should say that a 'formal registration' under the terms of RFC3406 is being sought. s2.9: I think I understand why listing with an RDS is not necessary but a brief explanation might help. Editorial: s1: Useful to expand NID again. s2.9: Expand RDS (Resource Discovery System). _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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