[Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-two-part-metric-09

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Thu, 06 October 2016 22:43 UTC

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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-two-part-metric-09
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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-two-part-metric-09.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2016-10-07
IETF LC End Date: 2016-08-15
IESG Telechat date: 2016-10-13

Summary: Ready (with nit)
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Comments:
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Thanks for responding to my last call comments. I have no objection
to the other changes but they lead to:

Nit:
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Delete "5340" from the Updates: header.