[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-http-problem-02

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Tue, 15 December 2015 16:01 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-http-problem-02

Reviewer:  Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 12/15/15

IETF LC End Date: 12/4/15

IESG Telechat date: 12/17/15



Summary: Ready



A very useful, clear and well written document.



The only minor issue that I raised in my first review was clarified in an email exchange and no edits were required.



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