Re: [Gen-art] [Taps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-taps-interface-20

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From: Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>
To: Michael Welzl <michawe@ifi.uio.no>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Taps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-taps-interface-20
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Hi Michael,

On 05/06/2023, 19:05, "Michael Welzl" michawe@ifi.uio.no<mailto:michawe@ifi.uio.no> wrote:
> I want to thank you very much for this extremely detailed review, and
> also apologize for not answering this for so long - it has somehow
> fallen through the cracks as we dealt with all the reviews, in fact
> because it arrived so early!  We merged your PR but I forgot that
> there was also a much longer email somewhere in one of my mail
> folders…  I take this blame!

No problems at all :-)

> I have now opened issues in our github repository on these matters:
> https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts/issues
>
> ... and we’ll deal with them one by one, there. Please feel free to
> comment there - and many thanks again!

Sure I am going to follow the discussion there, and thank you for taking
my comments into consideration.

BTW, I think in my review I forgot to mention that this document
contains great stuff and it's high quality.  So a big thank you to all
TAPS folks who worked on it.  Also, IIRC, a few years ago, the NEAT
project had one of its early meetings in our office in Cambridge?  I was
in charge with the logistics and I remember going to the Italian deli to
place the order for your lunch. I reckon I probably deserve an ACK for
the panini :-)

Cheers, t


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