[Gen-art] Review: draft-mglt-ipsecme-clone-ike-sa-05.txt

["Joel M. Halpern" <[e-mail]>]

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Document: draft-mglt-ipsecme-clone-ike-sa-05.txt
Cloning IKE SA in the Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2)

Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 2-Oct-2015
IETF LC End Date: 27-Oct-2015
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Propsoed 
Standard RFC.

Major issues:
     The introductory material talks about the case where both sides 
have multiple interfaces.  It is not clear what will happen with this 
mechanism in that case.
     In particular, if I have two systems, with three interfaces, it 
seems that this will start by creating the S1-D1 Security Association. 
It seems straightforward for each side to create their simple additional 
assocations (S2-D1, S3-D1, and S1-D2, S1-D3).
     But the introduction suggests that we also want to create S2-D2, 
S3-D3, S2-D3, and S3-D2.  With no other guidance, it appears that both 
sides will try to create all four of those, creating 8 security 
associations instead of 4.
     I hope that I have simply missed something in the document that 
resolves this.

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: