[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-radext-ieee802ext-11
Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Thu, 27 March 2014 13:59 UTC
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[Apologies, I wrote this up earlier in the week then seem to have failed to send it.] I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-radext-ieee802ext-11 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2014-03-25 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: 2014-03-17 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a proposed standard. All of my previous comments have been addressed in correspondence. Major issues: None Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: -- While by no means a show stopper, I think it might be helpful to add a little of the explanation that the authors offered in email to address my original questions about sections 2.1 and 2.2.
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