[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pce-initiated-lsp-10

Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Thu, 10 August 2017 23:17 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pce-initiated-lsp-10

Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-pce-pce-initiated-lsp-10
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2017-08-10
IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-23
IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-31

Summary: This document as a Proposed Standard RFC

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
    It seems odd to have a message for the creation or deletion of an LSP
    called an LSP Initiate Request.

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-p… Joel Halpern
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Julien Meuric
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Joel M. Halpern
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)