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Ben Campbell <ben@estacado.net> Tue, 15 July 2008 15:18 UTC

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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-psamp-framework-13
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date:  15 July 2008
IESG Telechat date: 17 July 2008

Summary:

This document is ready for publication as an informational RFC.

Comments:

This version addresses all of my comments concerning version 12.

idnits reports some outdated references:

   == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of
      draft-ietf-psamp-info-08

   == Outdated reference: A later version (-11) exists of
      draft-ietf-psamp-sample-tech-10

Also, idnits complains about no IANA considerations section. I see  
that there is one, so I don't know what is making it unhappy.

Thanks!

Ben.

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