[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-hip-rvs-05.txt

Scott W Brim <swb@employees.org> Wed, 04 April 2007 20:07 UTC

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Nothing has changed since -04, so just FYI on idnits ...

idnits 2.04.05 found a few things ...

tmp/draft-ietf-hip-rvs-05.txt:

  Checking boilerplate required by RFC 3978 and 3979, updated by RFC 4748:

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  ** This document has an original RFC 3978 Section 5.4 Copyright Line,
     instead of the newer IETF Trust Copyright according to RFC 4748.

  ** This document has an original RFC 3978 Section 5.5 Disclaimer,
instead
     of the newer disclaimer which includes the IETF Trust according
to RFC
     4748.


  Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt:

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  == No 'Intended status' indicated for this document; assuming Proposed
     Standard


  Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:

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     No issues found here.

  Miscellaneous warnings:

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  == The copyright year in the RFC 3978 Section 5.4 Copyright Line
does not
     match the current year


  Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard

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  == Outdated reference: A later version (-07) exists of
     draft-ietf-hip-base-05

  ** Downref: Normative reference to an Experimental draft:
     draft-ietf-hip-base (ref. 'I-D.ietf-hip-base')

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-08) exists of
draft-ietf-hip-dns-06

  ** Downref: Normative reference to an Experimental draft:
     draft-ietf-hip-dns (ref. 'I-D.ietf-hip-dns')

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of
     draft-ietf-hip-registration-01

  ** Downref: Normative reference to an Experimental draft:
     draft-ietf-hip-registration (ref. 'I-D.ietf-hip-registration')

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-05) exists of
draft-ietf-hip-mm-03


     Summary: 5 errors (**), 6 warnings (==), 0 comments (--).


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