[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-transport-04
Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Mon, 20 July 2009 06:48 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-transport-04
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Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: raft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-transport-04 Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Review Date: 20 July 2009 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: All acronyms need to be expanded on their first use. This includes the title and the abstract of the draft. Generally, abstracts should not contain references. I suggest removing the reference to RFC 4448 from it. Thanks, Gonzalo
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