[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-09
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Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review result: Ready with Issues Gen-ART *Last Call* review of draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-09 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-09.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2017-10-14 IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-25 IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-26 Summary: Ready with issues -------- Comment: -------- The shepherd says: > This includes at least two different implementations of > the model, as well as product and demos at Bits-n-Bytes. Shouldn't WGs make routine use of BCP 205, RFC 7942 "Improving Awareness of Running Code: The Implementation Status Section"? Minor Issues: ------------- In the following: | +--ro min-delay-value? uint32 | +--ro max-delay-value? uint32 | +--ro average-delay-value? uint32 +--ro session-jitter-statistics | +--ro time-resolution-value? identityref | +--ro min-jitter-value? uint32 | +--ro max-jitter-value? uint32 | +--ro average-jitter-value? uint32 what are the units for the delay-value and jitter-value elements, and what definition of 'jitter' is intended? identity protocol-id-internet { base protocol-id; description "Internet Protocols."; } It isn't clear what "Internet Protocols" means. It seems totally non-specific. Nits: ----- identity protocol-id-propreitary { base protocol-id; description "Propreitary protocol (eg.,IP SLA)."; s/propreitary/proprietary/ s/Propreitary/Proprietary/
- [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-li… Brian Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Qin Wu
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Qin Wu
- Re: [Gen-art] [Lime] Genart telechat review of dr… Greg Mirsky
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Qin Wu
- Re: [Gen-art] [Lime] Genart telechat review of dr… Qin Wu
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Alissa Cooper
- Re: [Gen-art] [Lime] Genart telechat review of dr… Alissa Cooper
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] [Lime] Genart telechat review of dr… Qin Wu
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Qin Wu