[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-17
Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 28 February 2024 18:49 UTC
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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-17
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2024-02-28
IETF LC End Date: 2024-03-01
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary:From a GenArt perspective this draft is ready for publication. As per
other review comments I trust that a YANG expert has validated the YANG models.
There are a couple of minor nits.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
== Unused Reference: 'I-D.ietf-ccamp-otn-tunnel-model' is defined on line
3662, but no explicit reference was found in the text
== Unused Reference: 'RFC4203' is defined on line 3684, but no explicit
reference was found in the text
== Unused Reference: 'RFC7138' is defined on line 3698, but no explicit
reference was found in the text
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