[Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-turner-deviceowner-attribute-02
"McCann Peter-A001034" <pete.mccann@motorola.com> Tue, 17 November 2009 19:18 UTC
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All my comments were addressed, but I think a new typo was introduced. The old draft correctly used the term "digram" to refer to a sequence of two letters (as in a country code). The latest revision changed this to "diagram", which I think is incorrect. -Pete
- [Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-turner-deviceo… McCann Peter-A001034
- Re: [Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-turner-dev… Sean Turner