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"Rabadan, Jorge (Nokia - US/Mountain View)" <jorge.rabadan@nokia.com> Thu, 08 February 2018 14:07 UTC

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From: "Rabadan, Jorge (Nokia - US/Mountain View)" <jorge.rabadan@nokia.com>
To: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-07
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Thank you Roni.
I fixed the nits you referred to.

Jorge

-----Original Message-----
From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
Date: Thursday, February 8, 2018 at 3:02 PM
To: "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
Cc: "draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage.all@ietf.org>, "ietf@ietf.org" <ietf@ietf.org>, "bess@ietf.org" <bess@ietf.org>
Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-07
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Resent-Date: Thursday, February 8, 2018 at 3:01 PM

    Reviewer: Roni Even
    Review result: Ready with Nits
    
    I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
    Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
    by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
    like any other last call comments.
    
    For more information, please see the FAQ at
    
    <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
    
    Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-??
    Reviewer: Roni Even
    Review Date: 2018-02-08
    IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-09
    IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22
    
    Summary:
    The document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC
    
    Major issues:
    
    Minor issues:
    
    Nits/editorial comments:
    In section 3.1 toward the end "For example, we can use ingress replication for
    on EVI100" no need for "for on"

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