Re: [Gen-art] [bmwg] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-meth-08

Hi Stewart ,
Thank you reviewing the changes in the revised draft. We apologize for missed out some of your comments. We will address them as mentioned below in the newer draft version.

1. Regarding your #1 comment, we will add a note to mention that 'OpenFlow protocol is used as an example to illustrate the methodologies defined in this document'. Hope this works
2. We will clarify about the Test Traffic Generators (TP1/2) connectivity in the setup. We will update such that 'TP1 SHOULD be connected to Network Device 1 and TP2 SHOULD be connected to Network Device n'.
Best regards,
Bhuvan

On Mon, Apr 16, 2018 at 06:18 PM, Stewart Bryant  wrote:
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-sdn-controller-benchmark-meth-08
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2018-04-16
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-02
IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-19

Summary:

This is a well written comprehensive test set for SDN controllers. Two minor
points remain from my previous review that I would draft to the attention of
the responsible AD.

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

I found the large amount of text on Openflow that appears out of the blue in
the appendix somewhat strange since the test suit is controller protocol
agnostic. I understand that this is included by way of illustrative example. It
might be useful to the reader to make a statement to this effect.

Nits/editorial comments:

The test traffic
generators TP1 and TP2 SHOULD be connected to the first and the last
leaf Network Device.

SB> I am sure I know what does first and last mean, but the meaning should be
called out.

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