[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-meadors-multiple-attachments-ediint-12

Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org> Mon, 06 June 2011 13:11 UTC

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Document: draft-meadors-multiple-attachments-ediint-12
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 2011-06-06
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2011-06-09

Summary: Ready.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

My nit from the last review was not addressed.  Maybe it is a non-issue?

There is a space in the declaration of boundary=" INNER-BOUNDARY";
in the example in section 3.  I am not sure whether this was intentional
or whether it will mess up a standard MIME parser, but you may want
to remove it.