[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-iijima-netconf-soap-implementation-09
Christian Vogt <christian.vogt@nomadiclab.com> Thu, 03 July 2008 14:32 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-iijima-netconf-soap-implementation-09
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document..........: draft-iijima-netconf-soap-implementation-09 Reviewer..........: Christian Vogt Review date.......: 2008/07/03 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. One comment regarding section 3.1.2 ("Session Maintenance in NMS"): The section says that session maintenance functions at HTTP and at NETCONF level are necessary to ensure that the same NETCONF service provider is used every time a given NETCONF application sends a message. However, it seems that for this purpose only a session at NETCONF layer is necessary. Different messages could be carried over different HTTP connections, yet still be associated with the right NETCONF session. As a matter of fact, the approach proposed in section 3.1.2 -- carrying session IDs as HTTP cookies -- is a way to provide a session at the NETCONF level. It does not create a session at the HTTP level. I suggest to clarify that a session is needed (only) for the NETCONF level, and that session IDs can be carried as HTTP cookies to achieve this. - Christian _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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