[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-isis-05.txt

"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@alcatel-lucent.com> Tue, 05 June 2007 20:50 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-isis-05.txt
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Document: draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-isis-05.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 05 Jun 2007
IESG Telechat date: 06 Jun 2007

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard RFC.  One nit:

- Section 4.1.5: s/Suggested value =4/Suggested value =5

The value "4" belongs to NEIG-PCE-DOMAIN Sub-TLV; the value
of PCE-CAP-FLAGS Sub-TLV should be "5."

Thanks,

- vijay
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