[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-camarillo-rai-media-policy-dataset-01

Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org> Thu, 14 June 2012 01:08 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-camarillo-rai-media-policy-dataset-01
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document: draft-camarillo-rai-media-policy-dataset-01
Reviewer: Peter McCann
Review Date: 2012-06-13
IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-11
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: Ready

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 5.1.2:
   encoding
   of profile
SHOULD BE:
   encoding
   or profile

Section 9:
   those face policies
SHOULD BE:
   those fake policies