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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 25 June 2015 13:32 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08
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Thanks for your review!

Jari

On 25 Jun 2015, at 09:04, Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
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> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08.txt
> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
> Review Date: 2015-06-25
> IETF LC End Date: 2015-06-18
> IESG Telechat date: 2015-06-25
> 
> Summary: Ready with nits.
> 
> Major issues:  None
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> In Section 3.3 - did you mean R5 when talking about P5? I've searched multiple times and couldn't find it on the picture.
> 
> In 6.2.1:
> 
>> When selecting the best alternate, the selection algorithm MUST
>> consider all available alternates (connected or tunnel).  Especially,
>> computation of PQ set ([I-D.ietf-rtgwg-remote-lfa]) SHOULD be
>> performed before best alternate selection.
> 
> The SHOULD level requirement makes the reference Normative, while it is listed as Informative.
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