[Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-pkix-rfc5272-bis

Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Thu, 08 September 2011 10:43 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-pkix-rfc5272-bis-07
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 8 September 2011
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 8 September 2011

Summary: (More or Less) Ready.  Essentially all problems from last call 
review fixed.  I feel that actually updating the base documents would be 
a better approach.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: