[Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review for draft-ietf-clue-telepresence-requirements

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Wed, 05 February 2014 09:25 UTC

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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.


Document:  draft-ietf-clue-telepresence-requirements-07.txt

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 2/5/2014

IETF LC End Date: 11/27/2013

IESG Telechat date: 2/6/2014



Summary:

Ready - all issues raised in my LC review were addressed. Thanks.



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