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Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Thu, 06 June 2019 06:20 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pce-association-group-09
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-pce-association-group-09

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2019-06-05
IETF LC End Date: 2019-06-06
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have a comment .
Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
It could help to clarify if this proposal brings any new requirements on existing LSP OAM/path protection techniques, or brings the need for extensions.


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
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