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[Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-solmaxrt-update-05 (second review - for IESG telechat)

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Sun, 22 September 2013 15:30 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

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Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-solmaxrt-update-05
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 9/22/13
IETF LC End Date: 9/3/13
IESG Telechat date: 9/26/13

Summary: This document is ready. 

The two issues raised in my review on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-solmaxrt-update-03 were addressed - one by accepting the proposed edit, the second by text in the proposed rechartering of the WG

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