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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Wed, 12 April 2023 13:14 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03
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Dan, thank you for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Lars

> On 18. Mar 2023, at 10:36, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03
> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review Date: 2023-03-18
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-03-22
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This is a short and clear document describing the usage of the
> 'sip-trunking-capability' link relation type by an enterprise SIP network to
> retrieve a SIP trunking capability set document containing the capabilities and
> configuration requirements of an ITSP.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> 1. The description of the 'sip-trunking-capability' link relation by IANA does
> not seem to be fully consistent with the scope of the document as defined in
> Section 1.
> 
> In Section 1:
> 
> The capability set document
>   [I-D.ietf-asap-sip-auto-peer] encapsulates a set of characteristics
>   of an ITSP, which when retrieved by enterprise telephony network
>   devices allows for automated establishment of SIP [RFC3261] trunking
>   between the two telephony networks.
> 
> Description:  Refers to a capability set document that defines
>      parameters or configuration requirements for automated peering and
>      communication channel negotiation of the Session Initiation
>      Protocol (SIP).
> 
> I would consider mentioning explicitly 'SIP trunking' in the Description of the
> 'sip-trunking-capability' link relation in the registry.
> 
> 2. Should not  [I-D.ietf-asap-sip-auto-peer] be a Normative Reference?
> 
> 
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