[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-dharkins-siv-aes-04.txt
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Fri, 20 June 2008 17:10 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-dharkins-siv-aes-04.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-dharkins-siv-aes-04.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Informational RFC, but I have two comments. Minor ===== * The intended status in the tracker is INFORMATIONAL that I assume is correct. The draft states that it is on Standards track. This conflict needs to be resolved. Editorial ========= * In the definition of rightmost() s/significatn/significant/ Cheers Suresh _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-dharkins-siv-ae… Suresh Krishnan