[Gen-art] genart review: draft-kalin-geant-urn-namespace-01.txt
Robert Sparks <rjsparks@estacado.net> Mon, 19 February 2007 18:11 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] genart review: draft-kalin-geant-urn-namespace-01.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-kalin-geant-urn- namespace-01.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http:// www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational RFC, but has nits (maybe one bigger than a nit) that should be fixed before publication. caveat: My experience with documents that delegate registration authority is still limited - I might have missed things the document doesn't say that it should. The draft does not pass the id-nits check (with many issues, mostly formatting) It references RFC2234 (should be 4234). I'm a little concerned about the definition of equality in the draft (exact case-sensitive string match) when the ABNF allows % HEXDIG %HEXDIG encoding. Maybe there's a definition of equality this draft could inherit from? I'll defer to Ted on whether that's an issue with this kind of resource. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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