[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-intarea-probe-07

[Joel Halpern <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-intarea-probe-07
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2017-11-30
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-13
IESG Telechat date: 2017-12-14

Summary: This document is almost ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
RFC.

Major issues:
    I can not determine from the text why two identification objects are
    sometimes allowed, or how they are to be used.  The texts seems to indicate
    that they can be somehow combined to identify a single probed interface. 
    But I can not see how.

Minor issues:
    In section 2.1 in describing the usage when the probed interface is
    identified by name or ifindex, the text refers to MIBII, RFC 2863.  I would
    expect to see it refer instead (or at least preferentially) to RFC 7223,
    the YANG model for the Interface stack.

    The E bit in the Extended ICMP Echo reply seems a bit odd.  Shall we try to
    encode all the possible interface types in this field?  Shall we try to
    distinguish Ethernet directly over fiber from Ethernet over ...?  What
    about an emulated Ethernet interface (pseudowire, etc.)  I do not
    understand why this is here, and fear it is ambiguous.

Nits/editorial comments:
    I find the description of the node containing the proxy interface as being
    "the probed node" as being somewhat odd, as it is not the node containing
    the probed interface.  I would have expected it to be called "the proxy
    node"?

    Very nitpicky: In section 4, the step reading "If the Code Field is equal
    to No Error (0) and the L-bit is clear, set the A-Bit." probably ought to
    say "otherwise, clear the A-bit."