[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-arkko-ipv6-transition-guidelines-12.txt
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Wed, 22 December 2010 05:35 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-arkko-ipv6-transition-guidelines-12.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-arkko-ipv6-transition-guidelines-12.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is well written and is ready for publication as an Informational RFC but has some minor issues that need to be fixed. Minor ===== * Section 2 NAT-PT was defined in RFC2766 and not in RFC4966 (which deprecated it). Suggest replacing NAT-PT: refers to a specific, old design of a Network Address Translator - Protocol Translator defined in [RFC4966]. with NAT-PT: refers to a specific, old design of a Network Address Translator - Protocol Translator defined in [RFC2766] and deprecated due to the reasons stated in [RFC4966]. * Section 3.1 " For instance, a service provider network might stop providing IPv4 service within its own network, while still allowing its IPv6 customers to access the rest of the IPv4 Internet through overlay or proxy services." IPv6-IPv4 translation could also be used as a sunsetting mechanism. Could you include this as an option. e.g. " For instance, a service provider network might stop providing IPv4 service within its own network, while still allowing its IPv6 customers to access the rest of the IPv4 Internet through overlay, proxy, or translation services." Thanks Suresh
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-arkko… Suresh Krishnan
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-a… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-a… Suresh Krishnan