Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ippm-testplan-rfc2679-02.txt
Al Morton <acmorton@att.com> Mon, 20 August 2012 14:33 UTC
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Date: Mon, 20 Aug 2012 10:32:02 -0400
To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>, draft-ietf-ippm-testplan-rfc2679.all@tools.ietf.org, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ippm-testplan-rfc2679-02.txt
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Hi Brian,
- Please see attached review.
Thanks for your review and comments. I've added a conclusion
section and addressed other nits.
Your point on Errata: important to ensure they are evaluated.
We should submit an Erratum on RFC 6576 to identify
and evaluate Errata.
Al (for the co-authors)
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ippm-te… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ipp… Al Morton