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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Wed, 19 August 2015 21:10 UTC

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Thank you very much for your review, Meral.

Authors, have you seen these comments?

Jari

On 13 Aug 2015, at 21:31, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2015-08-13
> IETF LC End Date:  2015-08-13
> IESG Telechat date: NA
> 
> 
> Summary:
> This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC; I have some editorial comments.
> 
> 
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> -[Page 4], "which either uses"---->"which either use"
> 
> -[Page 5], Section 2.1 some of the terms are never used in the draft like 3GPP, BGW, MTU, SGW, TCP, LTE...
> 
> -[Page 11], "include CSRC in it's stream "---->"include CSRC in its stream"
> 
> -[Page 18], "with first hand information"---->"with firsthand information"
> 
> -[Page 21], Figure 4 caption would be clearer to say if it applies to sender  e.g. "RTP Pause States in Sender"
> 
> -[Page 50], "SRTP is the the most"---->"SRTP is the most"
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> 
> 
> Best Regards,
> Meral
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