[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-3967upd-downref-00
Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com> Thu, 10 November 2016 22:18 UTC
Return-Path: <peter@akayla.com>
X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 103901296E4 for <gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 10 Nov 2016 14:18:36 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.9
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.9 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, MIME_QP_LONG_LINE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H2=-0.001] autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id NBcvYKbMYwkX for <gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 10 Nov 2016 14:18:35 -0800 (PST)
Received: from p3plsmtpa11-07.prod.phx3.secureserver.net (p3plsmtpa11-07.prod.phx3.secureserver.net [68.178.252.108]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 58BC41293DF for <gen-art@ietf.org>; Thu, 10 Nov 2016 14:18:34 -0800 (PST)
Received: from [10.100.16.176] ([71.40.81.121]) by :SMTPAUTH: with SMTP id 4xdJcFbvrqwMe4xdKc12oe; Thu, 10 Nov 2016 15:15:48 -0700
User-Agent: Microsoft-MacOutlook/14.6.9.160926
Date: Thu, 10 Nov 2016 14:15:44 -0700
From: Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com>
To: draft-leiba-3967upd-downref.all@ietf.org
Message-ID: <D44A3190.19659%peter@akayla.com>
Thread-Topic: Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-3967upd-downref-00
Mime-version: 1.0
Content-type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8"
Content-transfer-encoding: quoted-printable
X-CMAE-Envelope: MS4wfEdK8kezYSrmlTIAdnhO8o6hwfv5sXoLpoTQXy8vA6q3K4v8DtJ57jqQF+nt8VEVr/ZTkOuUGZ0PfV8CeOSh+YJGkw6ZDTDxVmAXLN1guPu5V950cA5X dE0vrowvpZ41DbkmtZQTp+jNt12C6JDokfyQSvfw6A3e1L8Dp8URgTbE3482b7cPr1aIiZyoS6zLZsXIk/TqiubBh4XnMfzfryt3aZg65o5eiQcisVFL+0/I 3gchG+3GY/HOiZjs7dqb8Q==
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/zb7bP1PGvzHFS6TSlPU4zvQfAJw>
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org, IETF discussion list <ietf@ietf.org>
Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-3967upd-downref-00
X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17
Precedence: list
List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" <gen-art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/gen-art/>
List-Post: <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 10 Nov 2016 22:18:36 -0000
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comment. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-leiba-3967upd-downref-00 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: November 10, 2016 IETF LC End Date: November 15, 2016 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Best Current Practice, but has a nit that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits] The draft lessens the absolute requirement to provide downref indications in IETF Last Calls and provides the IESG with flexibility in the handling of repeated last calls in the face of newly noted downrefs in Standards Track and BCP drafts. Continued usage of the existing downref requirements can still be done at the IESG’s discretion. Comment: I’m aware of the update you’ve made to your working draft based on Brian Carpenter’s input and agree with how it has been incorporated. Nit: Page 2, Section 2, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: change “case by case” to “case-by-case”.