[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-extra-imap-objectid-06

Pete Resnick <presnick@qti.qualcomm.com> Fri, 27 July 2018 17:57 UTC

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Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-extra-imap-objectid-06
Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review Date: 2018-07-27
IETF LC End Date: 2018-07-13
IESG Telechat date: 2018-08-02

Summary: Ready with Nits

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Thanks for the changes responding to my review. Good work.

§5.2, ¶6:

OLD
   THREADID is optional, if the server doesn't support THREADID or is
NEW
   THREADID is OPTIONAL; if the server doesn't support THREADID or is

§5.2 ¶7:

Not clear to me why the THREADID and EMAILID can't be the same. I assume given
the MUST it's going to be some sort of interoperability problem, but it does
seem odd. But don't change it on my account.

§8.2 ¶2:

s/backend object collide/backend object identifiers