Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-msd-17

Jeff Tantsura <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 14 September 2018 18:02 UTC

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From: Jeff Tantsura <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com>
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Paul,

Many thanks for your reviews and help!

Cheers,
Jeff

On 9/14/18, 10:58, "Paul Kyzivat" <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> wrote:

    I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area 
    Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the 
    IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document 
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    Document: draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-msd-20
    Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
    Review Date: 2018-09-14
    IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-29
    IESG Telechat date: 2018-09-25
    
    Summary:
    
    This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should 
    be fixed before publication.
    
    Issues:
    
    Major: 0
    Minor: 0
    Nits:  1
    
    1) NIT:
    
    IdNits reports:
    
      == Outdated reference: A later version (-15) exists of
         draft-ietf-isis-segment-routing-msd-13
    
    We discussed this earlier during last call review and you indicated that 
    it must be a tooling issue because your document source doesn't 
    reference a particular version of this document. If so you can leave 
    this to be fixed by the editor during publication.