Re: [Geopriv] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-civic-address-recommendations-02

Peter, thank you for your review and all the editorial improvements!
We have incorporated your comments, so an updated version will contain
them.

karl heinz

On Wed, Jun 10, 2009 at 12:41 AM, McCann
Peter-A001034<pete.mccann@motorola.com> wrote:
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
> for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-civic-address-recommendations-02
> Reviewer: Pete McCann
> Review Date: 09 June 2009
> IETF LC End Date: 09 June 2009
> IESG Telechat date: (unknown)
>
> Summary: Ready with nits
>
> Major issues: none
>
> Minor issues: none
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> Section 3:
>
> s/ambigious/ambiguous/
>
> s/receipients/recipients/
>
> s/in border region/in a border region/
>
> s/PIDF-LO elements/PIDF-LO Elements/
>
> Section 4:
>
> s/interopability/interoperability/
>
> Section 4.1, item 2:
>
> s/whether or not they are/whether or not it is/
>
> Section 4.1:
>
> s/container, however,/container; however,/
>
> Section 4.2.2:
>
> s/exclusively, alternatively/exclusively; alternatively,/
>
> Section 4.2.3:
>
> s/optional or not to be used, and/optional, or not to be used, an/
>
> s/must not be used, street suffixes/must not be used.  Street suffixes/
>
> Section 4.2.4:
>
> s/address consideration/address considerations/
>
> Section 4.2.5:
>
> s/local names itself identify/local name itself identifies/
>
> s/may either assist/may assist/
>
> s/In case that/In the case that/
>
> s/docuiment/document/
>
> s/receipients/recipients/
>
> Section 4.2.6:
>
> s/address consideration/address considerations/
>
> s/RECOMMENDED, however,/RECOMMENDED; however,/
>
> Section 6.1.3:
>
> s/Registration are sorted/Registrations are sorted/
>
> Section 6.2:
>
> s/form the official/from the official/
>
> s/Austrian Building an Habitation registry/Austrian Building and
> Habitation registry/
>
> Appendix A:
>
> s/an uniform/a uniform/
>
> s/whole Austria/the whole of Austria/
>
> Section A.1:
>
> s/optional, the other Elements/optional, and the other Elements/
>
> Section A.6:
>
> s/URI to his RFC/URI to this RFC/
>
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