[green-bof] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on charter-ietf-green-00-02: (with COMMENT)

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Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-green-00-02: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I can get from the charter text that in the preparation of this charter there
has been lots of discussion on DOs and DON'Ts :-).

Some comments to improve the charter text further -

- I think charter text on deliverables are more quantitative than what are in
the milestones. I will suggest the milestones are replaced by the deliverables
and remove deliverables from the charter, or at least update the milestone
description to reflect what is in the deliverables.

- I don't undersand the meaning of "multi-level framework", will there be
multiple but connected frameworks? Please explain or rephrase.

- Dependencies and liaisons :

      - It is now missing where the dependencies are and where the wg will
      liaise

      - The frist two bullets of the list can be combined into one, they are
      anywas IETF WGs

      - the 4th bullet now repeats "The WG will collaborate with" that part
      should be removed. And if there is any special meaning behind not
      "closely" collaborte, then this bullet should not be in this list.