Re: [GROW] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-grow-bgp-session-culling-04.txt
Matt Griswold <grizz@20c.com> Thu, 21 September 2017 00:14 UTC
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Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2017 00:14:09 +0000
From: Matt Griswold <grizz@20c.com>
To: Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com>
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Subject: Re: [GROW] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-grow-bgp-session-culling-04.txt
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* Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com> [170918 17:04 -0700]: > Nits: > Operator (with capital O) has a specific meaning here. Also operator > (with lower case o) is used. It seems to be consistently used as > meaning operator in general (including Operators and Caretakers). This > is fine, but maybe some readers might be confused by the two meanings. > Perhaps it is worth pointing this out in the document. > > Are you intentionally not using periods at the end of bullet points? > It is missing for all bullet points in 3.2.1 and 3.2.2 except in one > place. > > This URL in the appendix should perhaps start with "https://". It > currently just says > "github.com/bgp/bgp-session-culling-config-examples". Fixed, thanks for reviewing!
- [GROW] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-grow-bgp-session… Stig Venaas
- Re: [GROW] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-grow-bgp-ses… Matt Griswold