Re: [GROW] WGLC: draft-ietf-grow-simple-va

Nick Hilliard <nick@inex.ie> Mon, 14 May 2012 17:16 UTC

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On 14/05/2012 18:15, Nick Hilliard wrote:
> nits:

another nit:

"different from the one assinged to VA-prefix" => "different from the one
assigned to VA-prefix".

There are possibly more spelling mistakes which I haven't caught.  Could I
suggest xml -> html -> cut-n-paste -> Microsoft word -> spell check?

Nick