[GROW] OPS-DIR review of draft-ietf-grow-simple-va-06.txt
Bert Wijnen <bwijnen@ripe.net> Tue, 05 June 2012 13:28 UTC
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Subject: [GROW] OPS-DIR review of draft-ietf-grow-simple-va-06.txt
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Hi, I was asked OPS-DIR review for draft-ietf-grow-simple-va-06.txt. At http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-grow-simple-va/?include_text=1 I found revision 08, which is the one I reviewed yesterday. Then today I found draft-ietf-grow-simple-va-09.txt, so quickly skimmed through that as well. It fixed/removed the usage of example IP addresses that were not allowed according to RFC3330. Also, Acronyms have been expanded. So rev 9 is better than rev 8. It seems to me that all the operational (deployment) aspects are described in this document. At least all the ones I could see. The document does not mention any "network management" specifics. I guess that means there are no simple-va specific management aspects. I am somewhat wondering if RFC2119 language is needed. I find one case where MUST is used (top para on page 7). I wonder if you indeed want to use MUST, if the following "should" and "may" in that case better be SHOULD and MAY. But all in all, I would think that for informational all lowercase must/should/may would be fine. I am not hung up on it though. Bert Wijnen p.s. I am NOT on the grow mailing list.
- Re: [GROW] OPS-DIR review of draft-ietf-grow-simp… Robert Raszuk
- [GROW] OPS-DIR review of draft-ietf-grow-simple-v… Bert Wijnen