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Re: [GROW] I-D Action: draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-01.txt

"Jakob Heitz (jheitz)" <jheitz@cisco.com> Tue, 22 January 2019 04:28 UTC

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From: "Jakob Heitz (jheitz)" <jheitz@cisco.com>
To: heasley <heas@shrubbery.net>, Job Snijders <job@ntt.net>
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Subject: Re: [GROW] I-D Action: draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-01.txt
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Could you change "community set" to "set community" in action items please.
"community set" can also refer to a set of communities, the container kind of set.

Regards,
Jakob.

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From: GROW <grow-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of heasley
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To: Job Snijders <job@ntt.net>
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Subject: Re: [GROW] I-D Action: draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-01.txt

Mon, Jan 21, 2019 at 01:51:50PM +0100, Job Snijders:
> > On the other side, the sentence "Vendors SHOULD share the behavior of
> > their implementations" perhaps can be made stronger by replacing the
> > SHOULD with a MUST. And perhaps remove the phrase "for inclusion in this
> > document".

s/share/clearly document/ is perhaps what is meant?

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