Re: [Hipsec] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28: (with COMMENT)

[Miika Komu <[e-mail]>]

Hi Alvaro,

ke, 2018-05-09 kello 13:44 -0700, Alvaro Retana kirjoitti:
> Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28: No Objection
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> Like Benjamin, I also found the relationship between this document
> and ICE
> somewhat confusing until the very end (Appendix B).  The attempt to
> "follow ICE
> methodology but reuse HIP messaging format to achieve the same
> functionality"
> results in lack of clarity, so I also agree with Eric's opinion that
> a rewrite
> would help, and support his DISCUSS.

we have clarified the relationship in the latest version (as discussed
in our response to Benjamin). Hopefully this addresses also your
comments.