[Hipsec] Preliminary HIP Registration I-D (Was: HIP Registration Extension)

On Wednesday 22 June 2005 15:50, Pekka Nikander wrote:
> I read this document again, and in general it looks good to me.
>
> The language could be improved, now it is a little bit too
> "abstract" or fluffy to my taste.  Changing some of the terminology
> and especially the definitions of terms would make it easier to
> read.  Also considering advice from draft-iab-model-XX.txt might
> help.  But content-wise, once a proper security considerations
> section is added, I think the document starts to be ready
> for a WG LC, though most probably we have to wait for the base spec
> to first advance to WG LC.

Folks,

I have taken in account Pekka's comments, added security 
considerations and try to clarify the terminology. You will find it 
here:

<http://julien.laganier.free.fr/draft-koponen-hip-registration-01.txt>

Please let me know if you have any comments.

--julien

PS: there is also a htmlwdiff but it's messy cuz I've reorganized the 
text a lot.

<http://julien.laganier.free.fr/diff.html>

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