Re: [HOKEY] Last Call: draft-ietf-hokey-reauth-ps

Both will be included in -09.  Thanks.

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t. charles clancy, ph.d.                 eng.umd.edu/~tcc
electrical & computer engineering, university of maryland

Glen Zorn wrote:
> Some comments on
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-hokey-reauth-ps-08.txt:
> 
> Editorial:
> In section 1, change:
> In many common deployment scenario
> 
> to:
> In many common deployment scenarios
> 
> 
> In section 4, change:
>       network support fast re-authentication.
>    Cryptographic Agility:  Any re-authentication protocol MUST support
> 
> to:
>       network support fast re-authentication.
> 
>    Cryptographic Agility:  Any re-authentication protocol MUST support
> 
> 
> Section 5.6, last sentence says: "The relation of the identities used by
> the transport protocol and the identities used for keying also needs to
> be explored."  Do you mean "The relation between the identities used by
> the transport protocol and the identities used for keying also needs to
> be explored."?
> 
> There is an extra space between sections 5.6 and 6.
> 
> 
> In section 6.1, change:
> EAP-SIM [RFC4186] and EAP-AKA [RFC4187] supports fast 
> 
> to:
> EAP-SIM [RFC4186] and EAP-AKA [RFC4187] support fast 

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