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Re: [homenet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-homenet-dot-12

worley@ariadne.com (Dale R. Worley) Thu, 31 August 2017 02:35 UTC

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Subject: Re: [homenet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-homenet-dot-12
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Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com> writes:
> I've updated the document to separate this out into three lettered
> subheads.   We can't change the numbering, because that's required by
> RFC 6761, but I agree that it's clearer if the three separate topics
> are split out.

I hadn't realized from the draft that the items in section 4 are meant
to parallel the items in section 5 of RFC 6761, since the connecting
text is only "(as per [RFC 6761])".  Perhaps it would help to amplify
that to "(per the template in [RFC 6761] section 5)".

Dale

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