[homenet] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-homenet-babel-profile-06: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Thu, 10 May 2018 01:45 UTC

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Subject: [homenet] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-homenet-babel-profile-06: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-homenet-babel-profile-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Some very minor comments:

Substantive Comments

§2.1, REQ5: I agree with Benjamin Kaduk that " MUST use metrics that are of
   a similar magnitude" is a bit vague to be used with a MUST.

Editorial Comments:

§1.1: Please consider using the 8174 boilerplate. There is at least one
instance of a lower case keyword.

§2.2 and others: I find the term "non-requirements" confusing here. Please
consider "Optional Requirements".

§3, first paragraph: "separates between configuration, which is done by HNCP,
and routing, which is done by Babel": The word "between" does not belong.