Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02.txt

Quick nit:

Section 3.2 says: "Currently three five methods have been explored by the
Human Rights Review Team, often in conjunction with each other: "

I guess that should be five methods?

Best,

On Tue, Mar 19, 2019 at 7:00 AM Gurshabad Grover <gurshabad=
40cis-india.org@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> On 11/03/19 5:16 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Human Rights Protocol Considerations RG
> of the IRTF.
>
> (Thanks to the chairs for scheduling time to discuss this draft at
> IETF104.)
>
> Niels and I have updated draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines with mostly
> editorial changes for now. Will appreciate any feedback on how to
> improve the draft.
>
> A note: HR-RT has reviewed not only communication protocols but problem
> statements, solution architectures, etc. At the same time, a variety of
> IDs in the IETF are including a 'Human Rights Considerations' section
> (draft-reid-doh-operator has one, draft-bertola-bcp doh-clients plans to
> have one, and RFC8492 also has one for what it's worth).
>
> Should we expand the scope of this draft to clearly include
> considerations more broadly rather than just restricted to communication
> protocols? (The updated title of the draft currently reads "Guidelines
> for Human Rights Protocol and Architecture Considerations")
>
> Looking forward to your feedback and suggestions on the list and at the
> meeting!
>
> Thank you.
> Gurshabad
>
> >
> >         Title           : Guidelines for Human Rights Protocol and
> Architecture Considerations
> >         Authors         : Niels ten Oever
> >                           Gurshabad Grover
> >       Filename        : draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02.txt
> >       Pages           : 27
> >       Date            : 2019-03-11
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    This document sets guidelines for human rights considerations in
> >    networking protocols, similar to the work done on the guidelines for
> >    privacy considerations [RFC6973].  This is an updated version of the
> >    guidelines for human rights considerations in [RFC8280].
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines/
> >
> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02
> >
> >
>
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