Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02.txt

[Niels ten Oever <[e-mail]>]

On 3/19/19 1:50 PM, Corinne Cath wrote:
> Quick nit:
> 
> Section 3.2 says: "Currently three five methods have been explored by the Human Rights Review Team, often in conjunction with each other:"
> 
> I guess that should be five methods?

yes, thank you! changed it for the next version.

Cheers,

Niels

> 
> Best,
> 
> On Tue, Mar 19, 2019 at 7:00 AM Gurshabad Grover <gurshabad=[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> 
>     On 11/03/19 5:16 PM, [e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]> wrote:
>     >
>     > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>     > This draft is a work item of the Human Rights Protocol Considerations RG of the IRTF.
> 
>     (Thanks to the chairs for scheduling time to discuss this draft at IETF104.)
> 
>     Niels and I have updated draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines with mostly
>     editorial changes for now. Will appreciate any feedback on how to
>     improve the draft.
> 
>     A note: HR-RT has reviewed not only communication protocols but problem
>     statements, solution architectures, etc. At the same time, a variety of
>     IDs in the IETF are including a 'Human Rights Considerations' section
>     (draft-reid-doh-operator has one, draft-bertola-bcp doh-clients plans to
>     have one, and RFC8492 also has one for what it's worth).
> 
>     Should we expand the scope of this draft to clearly include
>     considerations more broadly rather than just restricted to communication
>     protocols? (The updated title of the draft currently reads "Guidelines
>     for Human Rights Protocol and Architecture Considerations")
> 
>     Looking forward to your feedback and suggestions on the list and at the
>     meeting!
> 
>     Thank you.
>     Gurshabad
> 
>     >
>     >         Title           : Guidelines for Human Rights Protocol and Architecture Considerations
>     >         Authors         : Niels ten Oever
>     >                           Gurshabad Grover
>     >       Filename        : draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02.txt
>     >       Pages           : 27
>     >       Date            : 2019-03-11
>     >
>     > Abstract:
>     >    This document sets guidelines for human rights considerations in
>     >    networking protocols, similar to the work done on the guidelines for
>     >    privacy considerations [RFC6973].  This is an updated version of the
>     >    guidelines for human rights considerations in [RFC8280].
>     >
>     >
>     > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>     > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines/
>     >
>     > There are also htmlized versions available at:
>     > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02
>     > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02
>     >
>     > A diff from the previous version is available at:
>     > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02
>     >
>     >
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> Corinne Cath - Speth
> Ph.D. Candidate, Oxford Internet Institute & Alan Turing Institute
> 
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Niels ten Oever
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DATACTIVE Research Group
University of Amsterdam

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