Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02.txt

[Gurshabad Grover <[e-mail]>]

On 11/03/19 5:16 PM, [e-mail] wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Human Rights Protocol Considerations RG of the IRTF.

(Thanks to the chairs for scheduling time to discuss this draft at IETF104.)

Niels and I have updated draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines with mostly
editorial changes for now. Will appreciate any feedback on how to
improve the draft.

A note: HR-RT has reviewed not only communication protocols but problem
statements, solution architectures, etc. At the same time, a variety of
IDs in the IETF are including a 'Human Rights Considerations' section
(draft-reid-doh-operator has one, draft-bertola-bcp doh-clients plans to
have one, and RFC8492 also has one for what it's worth).

Should we expand the scope of this draft to clearly include
considerations more broadly rather than just restricted to communication
protocols? (The updated title of the draft currently reads "Guidelines
for Human Rights Protocol and Architecture Considerations")

Looking forward to your feedback and suggestions on the list and at the
meeting!

Thank you.
Gurshabad

> 
>         Title           : Guidelines for Human Rights Protocol and Architecture Considerations
>         Authors         : Niels ten Oever
>                           Gurshabad Grover
> 	Filename        : draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02.txt
> 	Pages           : 27
> 	Date            : 2019-03-11
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document sets guidelines for human rights considerations in
>    networking protocols, similar to the work done on the guidelines for
>    privacy considerations [RFC6973].  This is an updated version of the
>    guidelines for human rights considerations in [RFC8280].
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-irtf-hrpc-guidelines-02
> 
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